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1. In summation, I’ve given you some compelling details about…title
2. So next time. (mention title with detail 1)
3. Who knows, (detail 2 to detail 3)
4. That why (title…and purpose stated another way)
Title: Skittles
Detail 1: Taste
Detail 2: Looks
Detail 3: How often I eat them
Purpose: My favorite candy
Example: In summation, I’ve given you some compelling details about Skittles. So next time, when you are in the mood for something good, taste a colorful pack of Skittles. Who knows, you may be amazed at the sight of all the fruit and can’t put them down. That why Skittles are my favorite little candies.
November 18th, 2008 at 12:28 pm
Mr finkley teaches the best writing class in the world i love writing especially with mr finkley in summation i’ve given you some compelling reasons why i like mr finkleys writing class so next time i’m blogging i will write about it again!!!B)
May 29th, 2009 at 1:44 pm
Hey Mr.Finkley! You are the best writing teacher EVER! You taught my class on Wednesdays in Mrs. Jones 4th grade 1st Block. Hope you have a wonderful summer!